This is our feedback sheets, we have took on all the feedback on board and our going to work to improve our artist. we are going to put more of a narrative into our music video, as suggested by some one in the class. For example "i feel like walking the world" we have us walking and touring london and different areas.
We are pleased that our narrative has came through and is shown through and that they understand that we have a nature theme that runs throughout
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